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A Walk To Remember

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Good Morning everyone! Anyone else feeling nostaligic this morning? Well here's something I wrote when I was ...

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It seemed like a road with no end. Evergreen, dense trees on either side. I’ve never seen such a road yet somehow it felt familiar, I had no choice but to keep walking, enjoying the cool breeze and the peaceful silence. Slowly, I started to spot a trail in between the bushes, a neat path leading deep into the forests. Curiosity got the better of me and my feet lead me onto this small path. After walking for about 30 minutes, I started seeing something in the distance between the trees, as I approached I could make out the details, it was a beautiful house in the middle of the woods. Someone was sitting on the porch, just looking as me as I approach, as if he was waiting for me.

As I approached closer, I realized it was someone I had never seen before yet he also seemed familiar. He didn’t feel like a stranger. There was an instant connection between us, not necessarily a romantic one but just a special connection, as if we saw each other’s souls through eachother’s eyes. “Where have u been all this time?” he asked, “I don’t know,” I said, “ I was lost.” “You’re home now” He assured me. It really felt like home, but the strangest thing was that I have never been there before. He embraced me, and for once I really felt like I’m home, no worries, no anxiety, just peace of mind and tranquility.

“Come with me,” he said as he took my hand and lead me to the backyard. It was a beautiful garden filled with all kinds of flowers from roses and daisies to tulips and orchids.The aroma was breathtaking and I inhaled as much as my lungs could take, filling all my insides with a sense of happiness. We walked for a while and then he took me inside; it was a cozy house with a nook and a fire place. I wandered around using all my senses to not only see, touch and smell the house but to also feel the house, for it wasn’t just a house for me; it was home.

I reached a closed door and looked at him. He motioned his hand, telling me to enter. I slowly opened the door, and saw the most surprising scene. It was my room ! I was stunned. In the middle of this unknown house I found my room, and that wasn’t the strangest part. It wasn’t only my room but my room when I was a little child. I turned and found him smiling at the door. I looked at him with confusion, waiting for some kind of explanation.

“What is this?” I asked.

“It’s your room” He answered so calmly.

“This was my room, we moved along time ago, but what is it doing here ?” I confusedly asked.

“ Yes, it’s true that your family moved. But the room stayed with you. All the memories created in this room are still with you. The tears, the laughter, the anger and the excitement. Remember all these times? Don’t answer me because I know you remember them, and you remember them clearly. Never forget them, they are a part of you, a part of your past, your present and your future. Every time you think you’re starting to forget them, come back here, come back home and you will remember them. I’ll always be here waiting.”

I was speechless. He was right. Although we moved along time ago but I could still remember the smallest detail in the room. I looked around the room as tears gently trickled down my cheeks; I looked back and he was gone. I called for him, but there was no reply. It was time to go. I turned for the last time, stared at my room as memories of the past rushed back to me. I started heading out the door; I didn’t know where I was going or what I was going to do next, but nevertheless I felt content and safe.

I was back on the path, which I came from, but it wasn’t like before. I was a difference person when I left than when I came in. I continued walking, and the house started to fade away. I took a last look at the house and thought to myself “I’ll be back”. A big smile brighten my face as my journey to the unknown began.


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Cornellian's picture

Cornellian said Ok fine I'll comment on it! ...

Ok fine I'll comment on it! lol

Yes Cornellian, I've had nostalgic moments too, I mean who doesn't? But with good friends around it gets better. Nice story by the way, thanks for sharing :-)

(omg I need help! haha)

 

owen's picture

owen said lol cornellian.. ...

just wait...its a long read... :)


 

Cornellian's picture

Cornellian said Yeah I know owen, I had to ...

Yeah I know owen, I had to force myself to read it again cause I wrote it a while ago. Can't blame ya lol

 

owen's picture

owen said corne.. ...

great!..just great!!!!...am close to tears...*inhale*exhale*inhale...
i will spend now the whole day feeling this err homesickness...

did i forget something..oh, yeah *exhale..:P


 

Cornellian's picture

Cornellian said oh so u actually read it ?? ...

oh so u actually read it ??

 

owen's picture

owen said yeah corne, i read it..got ...

yeah corne, i read it..got lots of time anyways to do so....:P


 

Greeker's picture

Greeker said Cornellian... ...

Beautiful, poignant. You are getting better with your writing, kid. And so glad that you took my advice seriously, even if it was made all that while a go...

Keep writing. And yes, i was moved with memories. You touched a soothing nerve there.


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Cornellian said Awww thanks Greeker ...

Awww thanks Greeker *blushes*

 

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Greeker said Cornellian ...

Its the truth. You have earned the right to blush. Blush away!


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mir83's picture

mir83 said Lord of the Rings ...

This aint the Lord of the Rings....This is life, In the end It doesnt even matter...

 

Scarlett's picture

Scarlett said Hey Corne...that was lovely..... ...

you write quite eloquently, my dear. I do, however, have to wonder with posting the first post under your original post...how much sleep have you had, honey???? I think you are on the verge of asking why toothpicks have pointy ends...

 

Cornellian's picture

Cornellian said mir, what the hell are u ...

mir, what the hell are u talking about ?? Please don't comment on any of my threads.

 

Scarlett's picture

Scarlett said AND, Greeker....you are in such trouble!! WHERE were you ...

last night??? Kept watching and you never showed up!!

 

Cornellian's picture

Cornellian said Me? I've slept properly last ...

Me? I've slept properly last night...trust me...u would KNOW when I'm sleepy...can't miss it! lol

 

Scarlett's picture

Scarlett said lol silly girl...you shoulda been out with us... ...

missing your sleep and having fun...it was all Mufy's fault

 

Cornellian's picture

Cornellian said I would've loved to come, ...

I would've loved to come, but I seriously don't think it would've been safe for u guys! LOL

Plus I would've ended up flirting with most of the guys...I tend to that when I'm sleepy...Strange person I am.

 

Scarlett's picture

Scarlett said Well they would have loved it...just us married ...

ladies there until Bridge showed up...and..strange is GOOD!!! Make it next time!

Now, back to the thread...seriously...good story..did you just now find it again or just cross your mind today?

 

Cornellian's picture

Cornellian said Well I used to write alot, ...

Well I used to write alot, and still do, but my writing is on hold currently cause of studies. And I was going through the stuff I had written and I found this so thought I would post it. I wrote it like 2 months ago.

But I like the one I posted before this more. It has a nice twist. Well both of them do (but then again I wrote them so ofcourse I'm going to like them! lol)


 

mir83's picture

mir83 said Ridiculous ...

I was just commenting on your piece of writing cornellian Dont take it seriously..

 

copper's picture

copper said HEY corny.. ...

Beautiful story dear..I am nostalgic

I think Greeker and Scarlett are right.You have skills..Keep writing..We enjoy reading them..

 

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m_daylight said Nice one Cornellian and the ...

Nice one Cornellian and the words were chosen correctly. I thought at first you are seeing your father or some very close-to your-heart relative :) It left to the imagination - & its vividly detailed. I would say keep it up !!

 

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