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Salam...

Well yahan par hm jitne b paki hain jinhe poetry ka shauk ho tu wo yahan par apni poetry share kr skte hain....

Just waiting 4 ur Poetry gals n guys.... :)

Pyaar kamzor dil se kiya nahi ja sakta,
Zeher Dushman se liya nahi ja sakta,
Dil mein basi hai ulfat jis pyar ki
us ke bina jiya nahi ja sakta.

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NWTech said Ahmed Faraz mar'Hoom ki ...

Ahmed Faraz mar'Hoom ki nazr:

silsilay torr gayaa voh sabhi jaate jaate
varna itne to maraasim the ke aate jaate

 

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M.Farhan said Yaad ...

Aaj rothay huway sajan ko bohat yaad kiya
Apnay ujray huway gulshan ko bohat yaad kiya
Jab kabhi gardish-e-taqdeer nay ghera hai hamein
Gaisuay yaar ki uljhan ko bohat yaad kiya
Shama ki joot pey jaltay huway parwano nay
Ek teray shula-e-daman ko bohat yaad kiya
Jis k mathay pey nae subah ka jhoomar ho ga
Hum nay us waqt ki dulhan ko bohat yaad kiya
Aaj totay huway seeno ki bohat yaad aei
Aaj beetay huway sawan ko bohat yaad kiya
Aaj sar-e-toor bhi mayoos-e-tajali hi rahi
Aaj daar-e-yaar ki chilman ko bohat yaad kiya
Mutmaen ho he gay dam-o-qafas mein sagar
Hum asseron nay nasheman ko bohat yaad kiya

 

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M.Farhan said yaad ...

Tere firaak ke lamhey shumaar kartey huway
Bikhar chaley hain tera intizaar kartey huway

To main bhi khush hoon koi us se ja ke keh dena
Agar woh khush hai mujhey beqarar kartey huway

Tumhein khabar hi nahin hai ke koi toot gaya
Mohabbatoon ko buhat paidaar kartey huway

Main muskurata huwa aainey mein ubhroon ga
Woh roo parey gi achanak singhaar kartey huway

Mujhey khabar thi ke ab laut kar na aaonga
So tujhko yaad kiya dil pe waar kartey huway

Woh keh rahi thi ke samandar nahin hain aankhein hain
Main un mein doob gaya aitebaar kartey huway

Bhanwar jo mujh mein parey hain woh mein hi jaanta hoon
Tumharey hijr ke darya ko paar kartey huway

 

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mzain said ..........Faraz ki shayeri ...

..........Faraz ki shayeri ki bharpur maqbooliat k baad..ab Faraz ki choti behan Farzana ka daur..........sher mulahiza farmaiye....
.....kon kehta hai k mein pagal hoon Farzana.....
.....kon kehta hai k mein pagal hoon Farzana.....
..........jo kehta hai wohi hoota hai............
[:p

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..... why worry and have wrinkles...when u can smile and have dimples :o) ......

 

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Salmamohd said hahahahaha.....kool one ...

hahahahaha.....kool one

 

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M.Farhan said nice yaar... yeh konsi book ...

nice yaar... yeh konsi book me miley gi...hahhahah

 

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M.Farhan said ♥♥ Hum To Mojood Thay ...

♥♥ Hum To Mojood Thay Andheroon Mai Ujaalon Ki Tarhan
Tum Nay Chaha Hi Nahi Chaahnay Waloon Ki Tarhan.. ♥♥

 

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jackmohan2007 said Arz kiya hai... ...

Arz kiya hai...

Door se dekha to laga hasina...
Door se dekha to laga hasina...

Nazdeek akar dekha to nikalne laga pasina!...lol

 

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mzain said .............alatoooool!!.... ...

.............alatoooool!!........yahan to bary shair nikal aaye :p ............well jackmohan2007!! .............pasina kion nikla??..............hasina churail mein convert hoo gai kya??......hahaha...........

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..... why worry and have wrinkles...when u can smile and have dimples :o) ......

 

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M.Farhan said no i think wo hasina kafi ...

no i think wo hasina kafi garmi bi khari thi... anywaz.. keep it up...kafi tough competition hai

LOLz

 

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Salmamohd said hahahhaha...lolz...was a ...

hahahhaha...lolz...was a hasina....hahhaha

 

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fhanif said x ...

x

 

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sahil said hi, good one ...

ہیں اور بھی دنیا میں حسین کئی چہرے
اک تیری طرف ہی تو مائل نہیں ہیں ہم

فراز نے تو خوب کہا تھا لیکن
محبت میں توحید کے قائل نہیں ہیں ہم

Always help others to be helped by others

Always help others to be helped by others

 

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mzain said .........gr8 ...

.........gr8 yaar...........and fhanif!!...........yaar inn asha'ar ki tashreeh bhi kardo.........coz kafi difficult words thy :p ......hehehe.............

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..... why worry and have wrinkles...when u can smile and have dimples :o) ......

 

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Xray said kuch samjh nahi ata...lol ...

kuch samjh nahi ata...lol

 

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Salmamohd said hmmm....sahil it was ...

hmmm....sahil it was gr8....n fhanif yaar mje kuch smaj nahi aye....:(

Explain plz.....

 

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sahil said 4 u from my selection !!!! ...

Poet : Ilama Iqbal

اس سے پہلے کہ يہ دنيا مجھے رسوا کر دے
تو ميرے جسم ميری روح کو اچھا کر دے

کس قدر ٹوٹ رہی ہے ميری وحدت مجھ سے
اے ميری وحدتوں والے مجھے يکجا کر دے

يہ جو حالت ہے ميری ميں نے بنائی ہے مگر
جيسا تو چاہتا ہے اب مجھے ويسا کر دے

ميرے ہر فيصلے ميں تيری رضا شامل ہو
جو تيرا حکم ہو وہ ميرا ارادہ کر دے

مجھ کو وہ علم سکھا جس سے اجالے پھيلے
مجھ کو وہ اسم پڑھا جو مجھے زندہ کر دے

ضائع ہونے سے بچا لے ميرے محبوب مجھے
يہ نہ ہو وقت مجھے کھيل تماشا کر دے

ميں مسافر ہوں سو رستے مجھے راس آۓ ہيں
ميری منزل کو ميرے واسطے رستہ کر دے

ميری آواز تيری حمد سے لبريز رہے
بزم کونين ميں جاری ميرا نغمہ کر دے

اس سے پہلے کہ يہ دنيا مجھے رسوا کر دے
تو ميرے جسم ميری روح کو اچھا کر دے

Always help others to be helped by others

Always help others to be helped by others

 

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mzain said .............^^^for whom??? ...

.............^^^for whom??? :p ............

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..... why worry and have wrinkles...when u can smile and have dimples :o) ......

 

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sahil said for all of you dear ,,, 4 ALL OF U ...

for all of you dear ,,, 4 ALL OF U

Always help others to be helped by others

Always help others to be helped by others

 

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Salmamohd said lolz...zain...4 u:P ...

lolz...zain...4 u:P

 

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mzain said ........oooh ...

........oooh heck!!!...........sahil saab!!..........mein iss kisam ka larka nahi :p ...............heheheheheheheee...........

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..... why worry and have wrinkles...when u can smile and have dimples :o) ......

 

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sahil said to bhai , kis kisam ka larka ho ,, bata do please ----mzain saab ...

Always help others to be helped by others

Always help others to be helped by others

 

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M.Farhan said great saying sahil... Aaj ...

great saying sahil...

Aaj rothay huway sajan ko bohat yaad kiya
Apnay ujray huway gulshan ko bohat yaad kiya
Jab kabhi gardish-e-taqdeer nay ghera hai hamein
Gaisuay yaar ki uljhan ko bohat yaad kiya
Shama ki joot pey jaltay huway parwano nay
Ek teray shula-e-daman ko bohat yaad kiya
Jis k mathay pey nae subah ka jhoomar ho ga
Hum nay us waqt ki dulhan ko bohat yaad kiya
Aaj totay huway seeno ki bohat yaad aei
Aaj beetay huway sawan ko bohat yaad kiya
Aaj sar-e-toor bhi mayoos-e-tajali hi rahi
Aaj daar-e-yaar ki chilman ko bohat yaad kiya
Mutmaen ho he gay dam-o-qafas mein sagar
Hum asseron nay nasheman ko bohat yaad kiya

 

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M.Farhan said HAve a good tym.......Keep ...

HAve a good tym.......Keep Smiling

 

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abc150 said In honour of Faiz ...

Nisar mein teri galiyoun pay aye watan kay jahan
Chali hai rasm kay koee na sar utha kay chalay
Jo koee chahnay waala tawaaf ko niklay
Nazar jhuka kay chalay, jism o jaan bacha kay chalay

 

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abc150 said In honour of Munir Niazi ...

Punjabi verses

kujh unj we raawan aukhian sann
kujh gall icch gham da tauq ve see
kujh shehr dey louk ve zalim sann
kujh sanoun marran da souq ve see

English translation

Yes, the path I chose was tough to traverse
Yes, there was the noose of grief around my neck
Yes, the citizenry was also so cruel
But, ultimately, we too wanted to get killed

 

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sahil said well said Farhan ...

well said M.Farhan and abc150 , thanks for good poetry ,, and keep it up ,, all the best,,,

Always help others to be helped by others

Always help others to be helped by others

 

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fhanif said x ...

x

 

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mzain said ...........haan ...

...........haan yar...........kuch words to meiny first time sunny hain............sachi!!!...........

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..... why worry and have wrinkles...when u can smile and have dimples :o) ......

 

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Rizks said IRSHAAAD !!!! ME JAA RAHA ...

IRSHAAAD !!!!

ME JAA RAHA HU, MUJE KOE NA ROKO.
ME JAA RAHA HU, MUJE KOE NA ROKO.
MERA OFFICE TIME KHATAM, PAISA HAJAM.
OK - TATA - GOODBYE !!

SHUKRIYA SHUKRIYA .....

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I do all the Wrong Things in the Right Way...:)

 

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mzain said ..........what the heck was ...

..........what the heck was that Rizks??...........and nazii!! good one dude...........

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..... why worry and have wrinkles...when u can smile and have dimples :o) ......

 

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abc150 said nazii correct one is ...

Correct one is

Hum aah bhe karte hain to ho jate hain badnaam
Woh Qatal bhe kar dain to charcha nahin hota

 

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Salmamohd said Fhanif....u know meri prob ...

Fhanif....u know meri prob yh hai k my urdu is also very kharab:(

I think i really have to take clasess from yew...lolz

As u asked about poetry....i started loving poetry from the day i met ma kids k papa ...:$

& guys good going....nyc sharing.....

RIZKS...not again....huh

 

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M.Farhan said Usne sukoot-e-shab mein bhi ...

Usne sukoot-e-shab mein bhi apna payaam rakh diya
Hijr ki raat baam per maah-e-tamaam rakh diya

Aamad-e-dost ki naveed koo-e-wafa mein garm thi
Meine bhi ik charagh sa dil sar-e-shaam rakh diya

Shiddat-e-tishnagi mein bhi ghairat-e-maikashi rahi
Usne jo phair li nazar meine bhi jaam rakh diya

Usne nazar nazar mein he aisay bhalay sukhan kahey
Meine to uske paaon mein saara kalaam rakh diya

Dekho woh merey khwaab thay dekho yeh mere zakhm hain
Meine to sab hisaab-e-jaan barsar-e-aam rakh diya

Ake bahaar ne bhi keen aisi shararatein ke bus
Kubk-e-Dari ki chaal mein tera khiraam rakh diya

Jo bhi mila usi ka dil halqa baghosh-e-yaar tha
Usne to saaray shehr ko karke ghulaam rakh diya

Aur faraz chahiyein kitni mohabbatein tujhe
Maaon ne tere naam pe bachoon ka naam rakh diya

 

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mzain said .............waah waah waah ...

.............waah waah waah Farhan sahab!!.....apki poetry ne to anni macha di :p .............

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fhanif said x ...

x

 

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Salmamohd said i love poetry but its not ...

i love poetry but its not dis that i was completely serious bout it....coz its very tuff to learn Exact urdu....

 

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abc150 said In honour of Habib Jalib ...

Words written years ago and so true even today

Haal ab tak wahi hain ghareeboan kay
Din phiray hain faqat waziroan kay
maqrooz hai dais ka her Bilawal
paoon nangay hain Benazeeroan kay

 

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Xray said first time in my life i try ...

first time in my life i try to take interest in Poetry when i was in Pre Engineering long before... after that never get time to understand... so just enjoying now different types of Shair - o - Shayari.... :-)

 

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fhanif said x ...

x

 

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alik said i want to know that aswell ...

profile says u form pakistan

 

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alik said u pathan or somthing ? ...

u pathan or somthing ?

 

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alik said heres somthing i wrote myself. hope u guys like it ...

Tujhay sochtay rehna
Or muskuratay rehna

Teray wajood ko
Khud kay pass mehsoos karna

Tujh say larna or jhagarna
Tujh say rooth jana
Or khud say man jana

Tujh say khooob batien karna
Teray sang khamosh rehna

Tujhay daikhtay rehna
Or soochtay rehna

Tujh bin kitna adhora hon
Bin teray mai kia hon
Tujhay kitni mohabbat karta hon
Bin teray mai kia hon

Tu meray sath na sahi
Dil kay bohat pass to hai

Tu meri na sahi
Tera tasawor mera to hai

Ab bhe tujhay sooch kay
Ankhon mai anso aa jatay haien
Dil doob jata hai,
Hansii bhaag jati hai .

Tujhay lakh bura samgho magar
Bass Tujhi say mohabbat karta hon.

khabhe khabhe soochta hon ali
tujhay kitni mohabbat karta hon

 

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Salmamohd said MR....im not Pathan or ...

MR....im not Pathan or sometng ...im basically frm Lahore....but born brought up here....n its not must that if u belong to n e such place u should b fluent in ur mother tongue ....there r many Paki's who don even know Urdu ....i mean a single word...what im sayin is i know urdu ....but not da one u using for poetry....n dear i don think so the words wich v using n da poetry we use n our daily routine ....DO U GUYZ SPEAK DIS WAY AT HOME???Im SURPRISED:O

 

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bmw888 said jab ke baras ye darr tha ...

jab ke baras ye darr tha tujhe ko nade kahi
ab ke baras ye dua hai tera samna na ho!
howz tht.

 

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Salmamohd said Ohhhh bmw ...don say that:( ...

Ohhhh...don say that:(

 

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Salmamohd said lolz.....nyc one...abc... ...

lolz.....nyc one...

 

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sulmansaeed said my own ...

wasey abhi itnay he yaad han baki next time:)

zulfo koh teri dekh ker hum jeya kertay thay
ankhoon say teri jam-e-mohobat peya kertay thay

 

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Salmamohd said hmmm....baki baad mh suna ...

hmmm....baki baad mh suna dena....but this was good.....

 

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sulmansaeed said acha abe abe aik or taza ...

acha abe abe aik or taza sher kaha hai.......us bay wafa kay leyay:(

jatay jatay woh kasa zulam-e-intaha ker gae

apni sari yadon ke barat meray nam ker gae

kis kadar woh ajj muj koh tanha ker gae

meri zat he may muj koh fanaa ker gae

I still mis you:(

 

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Salmamohd said Its so touchin.... Thanx 4 ...

Its so touchin....

Thanx 4 it....

well had a small fite wd ma hubby ....will sms him now...tnx....:P

 

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Rizks said Dewangi se kum na thi kuch ...

Dewangi se kum na thi kuch apni justuju,
Hum bewafa jahan mein wafa dhondte rahay,

Mehromiyon k dor mein Kin hasraton k sath,
Hum chavalon ki BIRYANI mein BOTI dhondte rahay...:)

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I do all the Wrong Things in the Right Way...:)

 

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Salmamohd said hahahhaha....Rizks...goodmorn ...

hahahhaha....Rizks...goodmornin....hahahha...

 

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sulmansaeed said its a nice lyrics of a ...

its a nice lyrics of a song
that i like the most

zindage may kabhi koi aey na rabbah...

akay nay pher koi jaey na rabbah....

denay ho agar mujay bad ma ansoo....

phelay kabhi koi hasaey na rabbah....

 

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Rizks said GM Salma Zi ........ ...

GM Salma Zi ........

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I do all the Wrong Things in the Right Way...:)

 

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Salmamohd said me too love dat song.... So ...

me too love dat song....

So rizks BHAI....how u doin....

 

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sulmansaeed said are you sure:P ...

are you sure:P

 

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Rizks said Salma m fine, thk ku !!.... ...

Salma m fine, thk ku !!.... here take one more:

JiS se dOsti ki woh chor k chali gai
jis se mohabbat ki woh dil tor ker chali gai
ab chahta hon k jan de don main
jab switch main hath dala to light chali gai..:)

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I do all the Wrong Things in the Right Way...:)

 

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Rizks said Chand pe kaali ghata chati ...

Chand pe kaali ghata chati to hogi
taron ko muskurahat ati to hogi
tum lakh chupao duniya se magar..!!!
tum ko akele main apni shakal pe hasi ati to hogi..:)

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I do all the Wrong Things in the Right Way...:)

 

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sulmansaeed said ajj rothay huway sajan koh ...

ajj rothay huway sajan koh bohat yad keya

apnay ujray huway gulshan koh bohat yaad keya

jis k mathay pay nae subah ka jhomar ho gaya

hum nay us waqat ke dhulhan koh bohat yad keya

ajj tutay huway sapno ke bohat yad ae

ajj bethay huway sawan ke bohat yad ae.

 

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sulmansaeed said Pather bana diya mujhey ...

Pather bana diya mujhey rooney nahi diya
Daman bhi terey gham ne bhigoney nahi diya

Tenhaiyaan tumharra pata pouchti rahi
Shab bhar tumhari yaad ne soney nahi diya

Ankhoon mein aa k beth gayi ashkoon ki laher
Palkoon pe koyi khuwab paroney nahi diya

Dil ko tumharrey ansoo aziz they
Duniya ka koyi dard samoney nahi diya

Na sirf uss ki yaad chali haath thaam k
Mailey mein iss jahaan k khoney nahi diya

 

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sulmansaeed said Sab se chupa ker dard jo wo ...

Sab se chupa ker dard jo wo muskara dia,
Uski hansi ne tu aaj mujh ko rula dia.

Lehjay se uth rahi thi har ik dard ki dastan
Chehra bata raha tha sub kuch ganwa dia,

Awaz mein thehrao tha ankhon mein nami thi
Aur keh raha tha k mein ne sab kuch bhula diya,

Janay kia usko mukh se thein shikayatein
Tanhaiyon k des mein khud ko basa dia,

Khud bhi woh hum say bichar k adhora sa ho gaya
Mujh ko bhi itnay logon mein tanha bana dia

 

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Rizks said Sulman bhai ...... Buss karo ...

Sulman bhai ......

Buss karo mere bhai .... Kasam Khaa ke aae ho kia aaj ?? LoL

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Salmamohd said hahahhahaa...rizks let him ...

hahahhahaa...rizks let him ....huh...

khud tu awein masti mh kar rhe ho let him post...huh

 

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sulmansaeed said lolz...... yar ajj dil bohat ...

lolz......
yar ajj dil bohat zakme hai

its only for today rizks bahi

agar app koh bura lag raha hai tu i am sorry:)

 

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Rizks said ok ok post post........ me ...

ok ok post post........ me bhi - me bhi ....LoL

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sulmansaeed said plz last one rizks:) agar ...

plz last one rizks:)
agar ejazat ho to? lolz

 

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Rizks said sulman ..... No man i was ...

sulman .....

No man i was just kiddin.... post as much as u can - woh kehte hai na Jitna Dum Hai Post karte jao ....LoL

CheerZ !!!:)

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Salmamohd said hahhahaha rizks ab aye na ...

hahhahaha rizks ab aye na line ph..lol...sulman ...reallly nyc poetry...n btw don say dil zakhmi...raat gaye baat gaye....so chill n njoy life:)

 

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sulmansaeed said jabh seena ghum say bojhal ...

jabh seena ghum say bojhal ho aur yaad kisi ki ati ho
tab kamre main band ho jana aur chupkay chupkay ro lena

jabh ankhain baghi h o jaen aur yaad main meri bhar aen
phir khud ko dhoka mat dena aur chupkay chupkay ro lena

jabh palkain karb say mondi hon aur sabh samghte tum sote ho
tab mun pay takia rakh lena aur chupkay chupkay ro lena

ye duniya zalim duniya hai, ye baat bohat pehlai ghi
tum samne sab kay chup rehna aur chupkay chupkay ro lena

jabh barish chehra dho dale aur ashk bhi bundain laGte hon
woh lamha harghiz mat khona aur chupkay chupkay ro lena

 

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Rizks said Dil Zakhmi .....?? Guess ...

Dil Zakhmi .....??

Guess night me kisi chuhee ne kaat liya hoga tumhare dil ko ??? Apply some Petroleum Jelly Man .....

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sulmansaeed said thanks rizks...lolz ...

thanks rizks...lolz

 

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Salmamohd said Rizks....suder jao.....don ...

Rizks....suder jao.....don do tang khenching...lolz

 

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Rizks said Sulman ...... :( ...:(....:( ...

Sulman ......

:( ...:(....:( ruko ruko me thoda Ro Lu ....:( ...:(

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Rizks said Tang Khechaing ...

Tang Khechaing ....

Hmmmm...Yummy Muje Murgi Ki taang bahut pasand hai ....

La Haulvala Kuwwat, I m Fasting ...Shhhhhhh !!!

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I do all the Wrong Things in the Right Way...:)

 

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sulmansaeed said this is not like that kay ...

this is not like that kay rat gae bat gae

what about feelings and thouhgts...

kher choro sub.

we must enjoy life besides all that

 

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Salmamohd said sulman wat u sayin is ...

sulman wat u sayin is right...but if u knw nothin can happen den y.....i mean i personally don knw ats da prob but as u said bewafaa...so if she did that den y being sad for such a person....

 

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sulmansaeed said Main Kaise bhulaon tujhe aye ...

Main Kaise bhulaon tujhe aye SITTAM_GAR
Omar kat rahi hai . . . . . . Bhulatay Bhulatay;

Tera naam dil se mita toh raha hoon
Oubharta hai lekan. . . Mitatay mitatay;

Na Aahein bharoon main keh sholay na niklein
Kahien jal na jaye. . . . . . . . . . . kisi ka thikana;

Teri iss JAFA pe jo shola parray toh
Jahan jal na jaye bujhatay bujhatay;

SITTAM-GAR jo tou ne sittam mujh pe dhaye
Main kis ko bataon. . . . . . . kisay ja sunaon;

Sittam ka fasana jo main ched doon toh
. . . . . . Omar beet jaye sunatay sunatay;

Sewaaye KHUDA ke jhukaya na tha sar
Main KHUDDAR tha tere milne se pahle;

Tere darh pe ja ke zara khamm howa tha
Keh jhukta gaya sar jhukatay jhukatay;

Main ZAKHM-e-JIGAR tujh ko kaise dikhaon
. . . . . Dikhane ke qabil yeh ho toh dikhaon;

Mujhe yeh bhi darr hai mera ZAKHM-e-NAZUK
. . . . . .Kahien barh na jaye dikhatay dikhatay;

Lotteron ki duniya se tujh ko bachaya
Mere haal per na tarrass tou ne khaya;

Samajh Aaj Aayi keh khudd lott gaya hoon
Tujhe aye LOTTERAY bachatay bachatay;

Mujhe tou ne zalam hai kitna roolaya
Roolana hi tha mujh ko pahle batatay;

Qareeb Aa raha hai woh SAJID zamana
Keh khudd RO parro gay roolatay roolatay;

 

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sulmansaeed said this is my ...

this is my reaction...nothing else

what can i do...i dont know.
but i am still trying to be happy, coz its must for ones life

 

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sulmansaeed said these verses truly ...

these verses truly represents my emotions.

ok bye you all

I got to go.
Take cARE
AH

 

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sulmansaeed said OK RIKZS nice to talk to ...

OK RIKZS
nice to talk to you

meet soon again
bye
and do take care:)

 

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mzain said (deleted) ...

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..... why worry and have wrinkles...when u can smile and have dimples :o) ......

 

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Xray said so my gues was right about ...

so my gues was right about you mzain... tum to waaqaii chupey rustum nikley... anyway its not the end of life...
so for you and you only

1- Sitarun sey agey jahan aur bhi hein

and

2- tim nahi to koi aur sahi, aur nahi to koi aur sahi

 

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Salmamohd said hmmm...well zain im not sad ...

hmmm...well zain im not sad to hear this ....The person i Loved in my life ALhamdulilah i got him .....but Zain i know its reallly hard to accept this fact that the person u love isnt wd u n e more....lkn PAirs are made in heaven n who knows there is someone very special for u also....ya da way u loved someone koi asa ho jo k aapse b bht pyar kare....but i should say u one thing....u should have expressed ur feelings coz at tyms u dono....kal kya hoga....

My hubby n i just met through internet .....n guess what he had no feelings for me means just like a frnd he used to speak ...n once we had a fite n lolz....wich was too hard for me ....coz he said he wana end da frndship n during dat fite i said ma feeling to him being a gal...n now ALhamdulilah if n e one see's us dey say ur hubby is in more love wd u....bs all i want to say is k never hide ur feelings kabhi yh na sochna k wat will b the nxt person's reaction...

Chilll Zain u just like my bro n i will always pray k aapko koi ase larki mile jo aapse itna pyar kare k aapko kabhi b apne past ki yaad hi na aye:)

Keep smiling my Dear BRO's

 

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mzain said (deleted by the user) ...

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..... why worry and have wrinkles...when u can smile and have dimples :o) ......

 

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marhabtain said mzain ...

Its amazing - your picture - you look just like me! Yippeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee another gorgeous hunk in Doha! Gin time! Hic!

Yippee, Yippeee, its Mrs miggins Pie shoppefor me!

 

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M.Farhan said well so many stories... ...

Hay guys how u doing ?

 

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M.Farhan said well so many stories... ...

well so many stories... within few days.. its seems like salman VS salma ............
Well its good to know about salma that she does not know urdu very well but still she is good in poetry...

LOLz

 

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M.Farhan said Hum jo toote to is tarah ...

Hum jo toote to is tarah toote
jaise hathon se girr k pathar par
koi shafaaf aaiina toote
jaise palkon se toot tha aansoo
jaise seene main ik kamaan toote
jaise umeed ki nazuk daali
barg mosam main na gahaan toote
jaise aankhon main khwab ki doori
waqt e takmeel se ulajh jaye
jaise pairon tale zameen nikle
jaise sar par yeh asmaan toote
jaise ik shaakh pe bharosa kia
is pe jitne thay aashiyaan toote
jaise wehshat se hosh aa jaye
jaise ta dair main dheyaan toote
ab jo raiza howay to sochte hain
kis nay dekha tha tootna apna
hum jo toote to raayegaan toote
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M.Farhan said Hum jo toote to is tarah ...

Hum jo toote to is tarah toote
jaise hathon se girr k pathar par
koi shafaaf aaiina toote
jaise palkon se toot tha aansoo
jaise seene main ik kamaan toote
jaise umeed ki nazuk daali
barg mosam main na gahaan toote
jaise aankhon main khwab ki doori
waqt e takmeel se ulajh jaye
jaise pairon tale zameen nikle
jaise sar par yeh asmaan toote
jaise ik shaakh pe bharosa kia
is pe jitne thay aashiyaan toote
jaise wehshat se hosh aa jaye
jaise ta dair main dheyaan toote
ab jo raiza howay to sochte hain
kis nay dekha tha tootna apna
hum jo toote to raayegaan toote
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