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کہاں رھتا ھے

کبھی تو ھے یہاں رھتا کبھی تو ھے وھاں رھتا
ٹٹولہ جب بھی دل اپنا لگا کہ ھے یہاں رھتا

کہیں بھی ڈھونڈنے کی اج تک نوبت نہیں ائ
سماوی سات پردوں میں بھی منظر ھے عیاں رھتا

شبیہوں میں مزاروں میں ھیں اکثر ڈھونڈتے رھتے
جو چھوتے حبل ورید اپنی تو کہتی ھے یہاں رھتا

ضروری تو نہیں ھے انکھ کی بینائ بھی لیکن
جو دل سے چاہ نہ کر لے تو اس سے ھے نہاں رھتا

بڑی ھی بدنصیبی ھے گر تجھے نہ پا سکے کوئ
ٹھکراتا وہ بھی میں اظھر جو بس میں دو جہاں رھتا

kahan rehta hai

kabhi tu hai yahan rehta , kabhi tu hai wahan rehta
tattola jub bhi dil apna , laga kay hai yahan rehta

kaheen bhi dhoondanay ki aj tuk naubat naheen aai
samawi saat pardon main bhi manzar hai ayaan rehta

shabeehon main mazaron main hain aksar dhoondtay rehtay
jo chootay habley wareed apni, to kehti hai yahan rehta

zarrori to neheen hai ankh ki beenai bhi laikin
jo dil say chah na kar lay, to us say hai nihaan rehta

bari hi badnaseebi hai gar tujhay na pa sakay koi
thukrata woh bhi main azhar, jo bus main do jahaan rehta

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Naseebfinder's picture

Naseebfinder said shukriya ...

shukran

 

azharm's picture

azharm said Naseebfinder Ji ...

Bohat bohat navazish ap ki

 

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rezymalik said main samjha k pooch rahay ho ...

main samjha k pooch rahay ho k .... 'kahan rahta hai!! milta hi nahi hai'!!....lols

 

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azharm said rezymalik ji ...

apni apni samajh hai, isay kia kahiay... ap bhi theek hi samjhay hon gay

 

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Dot.Com said nice and sweet like Sohan ...

nice and sweet like Sohan Halwa in desi ghee ;)

 

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azharm said Dot.com ...

be had mashkoor janab itni meethi baat kay liay

 

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Naseebfinder said shukran ...

shukran

 

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Dot.Com said well Naseeb Azhar bai knows, ...

well Naseeb
Azhar bai knows, why i compare it with
Sohan Halwa in desi ghee

 

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azharm said Naseebfinder ji ...

Dot.com bohat meethay insaan hain is liay in ki batain sohan halway jaisi hain

 

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Naseebfinder said thanx ...

thanx

 

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Dot.Com said azhar jee ...

sub baatein apni jaga, but next time i need again :P

 

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Dot.Com said Naseeb ...

thanks for compliments :D

 

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azharm said Dot.com ...

insha ALLAH

 

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Sabhassam said Azharm Bhai ...

Mafi Mushkil, urdu hum nahi parsakte lekin sab comments parne ke baad ofcourse aap ne bohot hi atcha likha hai.
Vo kaun tha jo translate kiya kartithi? Chalo aap me se koi bhi karlo please.

Shukria, Meherbani..

 

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rezymalik said BHAIJAAN , URDU LIKNI ...

BHAIJAAN , URDU LIKNI MUSHKIL HAI.... PARHNI AASAN HAI... AAP TO ACHI KHASI CHATTING KARTE HAIN URDU MEIN.... LOLS

'MOGAMBO KHUSH HUA'

 

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Sabhassam said rezymalik behen ...

Haanji, bolne me mereliye easy hai, sikhna hi palega.

Shukriya

 

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azharm said sabhassam ji ...

sorry mujhay yad naheen raha kay ap urdu nai parh saktay, roman main likh diya hai, please go through it again

 

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Sabhassam said Shabash Azharm Bhai ...

shabeehon main mazaron main hain aksar dhoondtay rehtay
jo chootay habley wareed apni, to kehti hai yahan rehta

Aap ne bohot hi atcha likha he, great poetry..

 

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rezymalik said SEEKHNA MUSHKIL NAHI... ISSI ...

SEEKHNA MUSHKIL NAHI... ISSI THREAD MEIN AADHI AAJAYGI...LOL

 

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azharm said sabhassam ji ...

thank you so much for the great compliments

 

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Naseebfinder said Azhar bro, kuch lafz nahi parhe gai........ ...

dhoondh ujrde huwe logown mein wafa ke mote
ye khazane tujhe mumkin hai kharabon mein milein

(Ahmed Faraz)

translation ke baat hui to ye sher yaad aya...

 

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azharm said Naseebfider ji ...

can you please point out kaun say lafz?

 

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Sabhassam said laakho.n hii musaafir ...

laakho.n hii musaafir chalate hai.n ma.nzil pe pahu.Nchate hai.n do ek

ai ahal-e-zamaanaa qadar karo naayaab na ho.n kaamayaab hai.n ham

Shad Azeemabadi

 

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Naseebfinder said ...... ...

سماوی...حبل ورید اپنی تو کہتی

 

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Sabhassam said ye bhii to sazaa hai ki ...

ye bhii to sazaa hai ki giraftaar-e-wafaa huu.N
kyuu.N log mohabbat kii sazaa Dhuu.NDh rahe hai.n

 

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Naseebfinder said thank you ...

...............

 

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azharm said Naseebfinder ji ...

samawi ka meaning hai asmaani sat (7) asmanon ki taraf ishara hai kay ALLAH subhan hu wa taala saat pardon main bhi samnay hota hai

hable wareed gardan (neck) ki rug ko kehtay hain arabic main, Quran ki ayat main hai kay ALLAH garden ki rug say bhi zyada qareeb hai insaan kay agar woh janta ho to

 

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azharm said sabhassam ji ...

bohat khoobsoorat choice hai ap ki shairi main, dad qabool kijiay

 

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Naseebfinder said SUBHAN ALLAH, bohut Ala ...

SUBHAN ALLAH, bohut Ala kalam likha apne.
thank you for the translation.

 

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azharm said Naseebfinder ji ...

you know very well ji kay you will always be welcome
ap ki rai bohat wazan rakhti hai aur hamaray liay aizaz ki bat hai

 

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Naseebfinder said ...... ...

apka bara pan hai, apko shukrya kehne ke zaroorat nahi,
apka ehsan hai hum sab per. watan ke hawale se aur waqt ke taqaze ke nisbat se ap jo khidmat kar rahe hein, Qable qadar hai.

 

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yousri said Bhut alaa. "Think 100 times ...

Bhut alaa.

"Think 100 times before you take a decision, But once that decision is taken, stand by it as one man" - Muhammad Ali Jinnah

 

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azharm said yousri ...

be had mamnoon yousri ji

 

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Sabhassam said sau chaa.Nd bhii chamake.nge ...

sau chaa.Nd bhii chamake.nge to kyaa baat banegii
tum aaye to is raat kii auqaat banegii

un se yahii kah aaye ki ham ab na mile.nge
aaKhir ko_ii taqariib-e-mulaaqaat banegii

ye ham se na hogaa ki kisii ek ko chaahe.n
ai ishq! hamaarii na tere saath banegii

hairat kadaa-e-husn kahaa.N hai abhii duniyaa
kuchh aur nikhar le to tilismaat banegii

ye kyaa ke ba.Dhate chalo ba.Dhate chalo aage
jab baiTh ke soche.nge to kuchh baat banegii

Jan Nissar Akhtar

 

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azharm said sabhassam ji ...

kia khoob intekhab kia hai ji maa a gaya

sau chaa.Nd bhii chamake.nge to kyaa baat banegii
tum aaye to is raat kii auqaat banegii
un se yahii kah aaye ki ham ab na mile.nge
aaKhir ko_ii taqariib-e-mulaaqaat banegii

Daagh dehlawi ka kalam paish hai:

uzr aane me.n bhii hai aur bulaate bhii nahii.n
baais-e-tark-e-mulaaqaat bataate bhii nahii.n

Khuub pardaa hai ke chilaman se lage baiThe hai.n
saaf chhupate bhii nahii.n saamane aate bhii nahii.n


 

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main_ik_sarab_hun said azharm ...

azar bai kamaal ka likha hai dad qabool karaiy

 

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azharm said main_ik_sarab_hun ...

bari navazish ji

 

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azharm said Dot.com ...

bohat khoob

is se pahale ke bevafaa ho jaaye.n
kyo.n na ai dost ham judaa ho jaaye.n

tuu bhii hiire se ban gayaa patthar
ham bhii kal kyaa se kyaa ho jaaye.n

Ahmed Faraz

 

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Dot.Com said wow Hum b kal kyaa se kyaa ...

wow
Hum b kal kyaa se kyaa ho jaaye

Azhar sb. kuch b hojaaye, parr humm fir b kahengey, jo baat Multani sohan halway mein hain, wo kissi aur sweet dish mein kahan

 

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Sabhassam said dost Gam_Khvaarii me.n merii ...

dost Gam_Khvaarii me.n merii sa_ii farmaaye.nge kyaa
zaKhm ke bharane talak naaKhun na ba.Dh jaaye.nge kyaa

beniyaazii had se guzarii bandaa paravar kab talak
ham kahe.nge haal-e-dil aur aap farmaaye.nge

Mirza Ghalib

 

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Dot.Com said Sab ...

sorry mate too much difficult to diagust ur roman poetry ;)

 

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Sabhassam said Its ok Dot.com. Koi baat ...

Its ok Dot.com. Koi baat nahi dost.. Azharm bhai ke bohot atche hai.

 

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Dot.Com said ahan sabhassam i didn't ...

ahan
sabhassam
i didn't meant that
mein tao yeh keh raha tha, k aap jistara se urdu poetry ko roman english mein liktey ho, oos ko read karna boht mushkil hain :)

 

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azharm said Dot.com ...

sabhassam ji hamaray azeez dost hain aur urdu ko farsi rasmulkhat main nai parh saktay, is liay roman main hi guzara hota hai

baraso.n ke baad dekhaa ik shaKhs dil_rubaa saa
ab zahan me.n nahii.n hai par naam thaa bhalaa saa

abaruu khi.nche khi.nche se aa.Nkhe.n jhukii jhukii sii
baate.n rukii rukii sii lahajaa thakaa thakaa saa

Ahmed Faraz

 

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Sabhassam said Dot.com, Azharm bhai ...

Thanks dot ji, I understand what you mean, I will try and adjust.

Shukria Azharm Bhaijaan.

baraso.n ke baad dekhaa ik shaKhs dil_rubaa saa
ab zahan me.n nahii.n hai par naam thaa bhalaa saa

Aap ki choice bohot umda hai.


 

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Sabhassam said main to aavaaraa shaayar ...

main to aavaaraa shaayar huun merii kyaa vaqa'at
ek do giit pareshaan se gaa letaa huun

gahe gahe kisii naakaam sharaabii kii tarah
ek do zahar ke saaGar bhii cha.Dhaa letaa huun

tuu ke ik vaadii-e-gul_rang kii shah_zaadii hai
ek bekaar se insaan ke liye vaqf na ho

tere Khvaabo.n ke jaziiron me.n ba.Dii raunaq hai
ek anjaan se tuufaan ke liye vaqf na ho

Ahmed Faraz

 

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azharm said Sabhassam Ji ...

Sabhassam brother actually i started this thread with an intention to pay tribute to ALLAH subhaan-a-hu wa taallah, as you can see that it is "HAMD". I wish if we can post some HAMD's and NAAT's in this forum. to start with here is my contribution:

Kaliq-e-loho qalam
chaiay tera karam

lafzon harfon ka meray
tu nay rakhna hai bharam

tu aleem wa muqeem
Rabe duniya wa adam

tu muqeet aur mughees
tu he aqleem-e hasham

kahoon dekha tujhay
jub chuaa baite haram

tuttay pattay ki tarah
larkharay thay qadam

by" Safder Hamdani

 

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yousri said Lafzon harfon ka mere Tu ney ...

Lafzon harfon ka mere
Tu ney rekhna h bharam

..SUBHANALLAH

"Think 100 times before you take a decision, But once that decision is taken, stand by it as one man" - Muhammad Ali Jinnah

 

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Sabhassam said Azharm Bhai ...

Thank you Bro, Alhamdolillah, aap ne shuru kia, bohot atcha laga.

Shukria...

 

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Sabhassam said Unpay jaan aur dil sab hi ...

Unpay jaan aur dil sab hi qurba hay
Meray aaqa ki sab say bari shaan hay .

Kis main dam hay jo Taiba ko khud ja sakay
Woh bula lain to unka yeh ehsan hai.

Aarzo hay farishtoon say aaqa kahein
Choor do isko mera sana khawan hay.

Mujh sa aasi bhi mahshar main bakhsha gaya
Unkay jood o karam ka yeh faizan hay.

Lab nahin ashq madha sarai karein
Aik aashiq ki yehi to pehchan hai.

Mein bhi naatein likhoon, main bhi naatein parhoon
Aik aasi ka mudat say armaan hai.

Unki toseef bas main teray hay kahan
Tu to adna sa Tahir sana khawan hay.

Tum parho unpay har dam Durood o Salam
Meray Rub ka bhi yahi to farman hay.

Syed Ikram Akbar Bukhari

 

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yousri said MASHALLAH. Upper wali HAMD ...

MASHALLAH.

Upper wali HAMD sey mujhy kuch lafzon k metlab pochney hein.
1) Sana khawan
2) Jood-o-karam
3) Faizan

"Think 100 times before you take a decision, But once that decision is taken, stand by it as one man" - Muhammad Ali Jinnah

 

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azharm said Yousri ...

1) sana khawaan: the person who recites sanaa
2) Jood-o-karam: The level of kindness
3) faizaan: the benefit

if i am not wrong, may be someone knows better than me

 

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yousri said Arey haan, jaisey ...

Arey haan, jaisey Naat-khawaan hota hai, ab mujhy yaad aya. Yani jood ka metlab "mertaba" hova?

Bhut shukriya Azharm bhai.

"Think 100 times before you take a decision, But once that decision is taken, stand by it as one man" - Muhammad Ali Jinnah

 

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azharm said yousri ...

you are welcome bro

 

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Sabhassam said Azharm bhai ...

Shukria Janab. Aap se bohot kuch sikhne ko miltahe. Once again, thanks bro..

 

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Miss Pakistan said Amazing ...

Amazing

 

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azharm said Miss Pakistan ...

welcome n thanks

 

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Miss Pakistan said I am happy to read some good ...

I am happy to read some good poetry after ages. Congratulations for producing good work.

 

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azharm said Miss Pakistan ...

It is an honour, please keep visiting.

 

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wild_lyone said azharm ...

poem is no doubt exquisite Buttttttttt

am i smelling somethin fishy fishy
alarm buzzing man- seems wood alert was left on
TC

 

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Sabhassam said Shukar Hai Tera khudaya, ...

Shukar Hai Tera khudaya, mein to is qabil na tha
Shuker hei tera khudaaya, main tu iss kabil naa tha,

Tunay apnay ghar bulaya, mein to is qabil na tha
Tuney apney gher bulaya, main tu iss kabil naa tha.

Bha gaya meri zubaan ko zikr e Allah, Allah ka
Yeh sabaq kis nay parhaya, mein to is qabil na tha.

Khas apnay dar ka rakha, tuney aie moula mujhay
Youn nahi dar der phiraya, mein to is qabil na tha.

Meri kotai kay teri, yaad say ghafil raha
Per nahin tunay bhulaya, mein to is qabil na tha.

Shukar Hai Tera khudaya, mein to is qabil na tha….

Teri rehmat teri shafqat, say huwa mujhko naseeb
Gumbad e khazra ka saaya, mein to is qabil na tha.

Bargaye syed e konain mein aa ker nafees,
Sochta hoon kaisay aaya main to is qabil na tha.

Tunay apnay ghar bulaya, mein to is qabil na tha….

 

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azharm said Sabhassam ji ...

Shuker hei tera khudaaya, main tu iss kabil naa tha,
Tunay apnay ghar bulaya, mein to is qabil na tha

kia baat hai ji, be had khoob

rafatain teray liay sub ajmatain teray liay
khaliqe harf o bayaan sab mudhatain teray liay

zindagi teray liay aur bandagi teray liay
ulfatain teray liay sub chahtain teray liay

Dr. Muhammad Ameen

 

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Sabhassam said madiine ko jaaye.n jii ...

madiine ko jaaye.n jii chaahataa hai
muqaddar banaaye.n jii chaahataa hai

madiine ke aakaa do aalam ke maulaa
tere paas aaye.n jii chaahataa hai

jahaa.N dono.n aalam hai.n mahar-e-tamannaa
vahaa.N sar jhukaaye.n jii chaahataa hai

muhammad kii baate.n muhammed kii siirat
sune aur sunaaye.n jii chaahataa hai

 

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main_ik_sarab_hun said miss pakistan ...

helooooooooooooooo miss
kese he ap???

 

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wild_lyone said Mr. sabhasam ...

nice choice man

 

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Sabhassam said Thanks buddy, alhamdolillah ...

Thanks buddy, alhamdolillah

 

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Sabhassam said Paak Muhammed nay farmaya, ...

Paak Muhammed nay farmaya, tusi karlo khidmat maa di.
Jisnay Kaaba takna howay, oh taklay surat maa dee.

Oh pai paiyaan day dushmaan hounday, tay bhai bhaiyaan diyaan bawaan,
Tay baap siraan day oh taj Muhammad, tay mawaan thandiyaan chawaan.

Khoob say khoub Madinay ka safar lagta hai, zara us khak ka phir ashkay qamar lagta hai,
Khoob say khoub Madinay ka safar lagta hai, pyaar karta hai Nayazi yeh zamana mujhsay,
Pyaar karta hai Nayazi yeh zamana mujhsay, yeh meri maan ki duaoon ka asar lagta hai.

 

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azharm said Sabhassam ji ...

Bohat achay bharaa ji tussi punjabi wi janday o, wah ji wah mazaa a gaya ji

 

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Sabhassam said Shukria janab.. ...

Uchiyaan lambiyaan aie taliyaan, tay ghaniyaan jinhaan diyan chawan,
Har eik cheese bazaroon labdi, par nahin labdiyaan nay mawaan.
Pyaar karta hai Nayazi yeh zamana mujhsay, yeh meri maan ki duaoon ka asar lagta hai.

 

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Miss Pakistan said aha... ...

aha...

 

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