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عشقِ دا سیک

میڈھی عرض تینڈھے در سٹ آون
ساڈھے شھر دے لوک اِڈے نیک وی نئں

کیہڑا اسم پڑھاں کیہڑا سہر کراں
کسے ھور ولاں توں ویکھ وی نئں

تینڈھا مست حسن میڈھا بن جاوے
ایڈھے سوہنے بھلے ساڈھے لیکھ وی نئں

ہک وار سجن ساکو تک ونجیں
ساڈھے ہتھاں وچ او ریکھ وی نئں

اؤے جا اظھرے سینے بھانبھڑ بلدا
او کو لگیا عشقِ دا سیک وی نئں

Ishq Da Saik

Medhi arz taindhay dar sut awan
sadhay sheher day lok aiday naik wi nai

kehra ism parhaan kera seher karaan
kisay hor walaan tunh waikh wi nai

taindha mast husan maidha bun jaway
aiday sohnay bhalay saday laikh wi nai

hik waar sajan saaku tuk wanjain
saday huthaan wich o raikh wi nai

oyay ja azharay seenay bhanbhar balda
o ku lagya ishqay da saik wi nai

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azharm said PUNJABI LOKKO ...

Punjabi dostan di farmaish tay ik nikki jai koshish keeti aiy, jay waila milay tay parh ghino sohnayo

 

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yousri said Azhar payi-ji, yaa tey taadi ...

Azhar payi-ji, yaa tey taadi istmaal keeti gayi punjabi berdi mushkil aey, ya tey fir mein taadi asaan urdu da shedayi ho gaya waaan :)

"Think 100 times before you take a decision, But once that decision is taken, stand by it as one man" - Muhammad Ali Jinnah

 

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blue_rose said all poetries in punjabi? ...

all poetries in punjabi?

 

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azharm said Yousri Ji & blue_rose Ji ...

meray pas koi rasta nahin kay tumhain bata sakoon
aur meray sheher kay log itnay naik naheen kay tumhain batain

main kaun sa naam (ism) parhoon, kaun sa jadoo (seher) karoon
kay tum kissi aur ko dekho bhi naheen

tumhara mast husn sirf mera ho jayay
itnay acha to mera naseeb nai hai (laikh)

aiy mehboob tum sirf mujhay aik baar dekh lo
per shayed meray hathon main woh lakeer (raikh) nai hai

Jao azhar teray seenay main aag (bhanbhar) jal rahi hai
aur usay is ki aanch (saik) bhi mehsoos nai hui

please accept my regrets both of you but this time i tried a fusion of punjabi, hindi, saraiki & potohari. I hope you will be able 2 understand what i was trying to write
Thanks 2 both of u

 

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azharm said Naseebfinder Ji ...

hasb-e-tawaqaa ap gehrai tuk pohanch gain, bari navazish, karam, shukriya mehrbani

 

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blue_rose said thanks azharm bro ...

thanks azharm bro

i understand now n its nice peotry

 

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azharm said blu_rose ...

it is so nice of you to try understand it and appreciate too
thank you so much

 

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Sabhassam said Azharm bhai ...

Thank you janab, aap ke shair ki quality high class he ji.

Bohot atche, shukria.

Salaams to all

 

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azharm said Sabhassam ji ...

Happy journey n safe return back home, duaon main yaad rakhiay ga
thank u so much

 

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yousri said Wah Azhar bhai. Bhut ...

Wah Azhar bhai. Bhut khoob.
Mein khud Islamabad ka houn mager i just love Pothwari. Bhut shukeriya app ka terjuma kerne ka.

"Think 100 times before you take a decision, But once that decision is taken, stand by it as one man" - Muhammad Ali Jinnah

 

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azharm said yousri ji ...

navazish janab

 

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azharm said Naseebfinder Ji ...

that is not at all a problem, and no need 2 say sorry that is your right anyway.

 

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leelah said o ku lugya ishqey da saik wi nai ...

wah, mashalla dil khush ho gya,simply beautiful.

 

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leelah said azharm ji ...

as usual hul chul mucha di.

 

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azharm said leelah ji ...

aray aisa bhi kia leelah ji, ap kay shukarguzar hain kay itna pasand kia

 

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main_ik_sarab_hun said azharm ...

taindha mast husan maidha bun jaway
aiday sohnay bhalay saday laikh wi nai
mar suta jay azharji tussi

 

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azharm said main_ik_sarab_hun ...

boht merbani ji twaddi

 

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azharm said Naseebfinder Ji ...

yeh to PIA wala naara hai na

"bakamaal log lajawaab service"

jub pani mangain to kehti hain jaiay na P.I.A

welcome back 2 U

 

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blue_rose said lolz azharm.. poor service ...

lolz azharm..

poor service khud la ker nahi deti..bolti hain P.I.A

 

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azharm said blue_rose & Naseebfinder ji ...

isi liay to ab bankrupt hotay hotay bachi hai dua karain kay buch hi jayay

 

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azharm said Naseebfinder ji ...

I am sorry if you are hurt but we got 2 live with the facts and what i am telling is a fact, but i do pray that ALLAH will save it.
abhi jo chairman hai PIA ka us ka interview main nay khud suna and was astonished to know it.
dua kijiay ap bhi

 

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blue_rose said kya matlab ? mujhe to kuch ...

kya matlab ? mujhe to kuch samaj hi nahi ai? azharm ji..kis baray may baat ho rahi hai? or naseebfinder ko Q bura laga? cant understand whats going on..

azharm ji ap simple baat kiya karein poetry walay andaaz may srif naseebfinder hi samaj sakti hain..not me

 

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azharm said blue_rose ...

Naseebfinder ji ko PIA kay bankrupt honay wali bat buri laggi hai, aur main nay kaha hai kay insha ALLAH PIA aur Pakistan dono phalain phoolain gay
koshish karoon ga kay bat simple hi raha karay

 

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azharm said Naseebfinder ji ...

I am sure about it, bus mushkil waqt hai tul hi jayay ga aur jo is waqt ko lanay walay hain un ki haar ho gi insha ALLAH
shayed ap ki nazar say "barbariat" naheen guzri
waqt milay to parhiay ga please

http://www.qatarlivi...

 

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azharm said naseebfinder ji ...

insha ALLAH zaroor

 

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yousri said Naseeb baji, apka reaction ...

Naseeb baji, apka reaction daikh ker mein yehi kahon ga k hum sehi k bhen bhai hein. Berdi kouft aur khoon kholta h jab koi TENZIYA andaaz mein Pakistan k barey mein +tive remarks daita h. Kuch arsey pehly mere tekreban sarey hi dost meri iss adet sey wakif ho gaye they, aur ajj unko bhi nhn pesand k koi yeh tune rekh ker comment kere. Bhut daihaan sey apni baat soch ker bolna chahiye, kiya petah koi app se SEEKH hi reha ho.

Meri dharti Maa, Pakistan, ZINDABAAD!!
"Think 100 times before you take a decision, But once that decision is taken, stand by it as one man" - Muhammad Ali Jinnah

 

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azharm said Yousri ...

that is so nice of you

 

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Naseebfinder said yousri brother apne buhat ...

yousri brother apne buhat ache baat kahe. Hum behan bhai hein. Tanz buhat buri cheea hai. insaan ko khoon ke ansoo rulata hai. apke sache jazbaat deikh kar ehtram mein mere ankhen bheeg gain.

ae watan mein ne tujhe dya ha kiya hai

is mein buhat se paigham aur ghowr o fikr karne ke dAwat hai. mein ne rote huwe is poem ko parha thaa.


 

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blue_rose said very emotional !! ...

very emotional !!

 

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azharm said Blue_rose ...

emotions runs the show otherwise it is only darkness
hai na?

 

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azharm said naseebfinder ji ...

i respect your emotions, and u r a great lady i know that

 

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Naseebfinder said Thank you azharm ji, I ...

Thank you azharm ji, I respect you very much.

 

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blue_rose said azharm ji ek respect per ...

azharm ji ek respect per shair ho jaye?

 

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azharm said blue_rose ji ...

agar us say bhi behtar kuch paish kar dun to?
parhiay aur apni rai dijiay ga please

kuch sawal hain, sochiay ga in ka jawaab, aur bataiay ga bhi

http://www.qatarlivi...

 

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yousri said Naseeb baji, Chand loog yehi ...

Naseeb baji,

Chand loog yehi kehte hein, Pakistan ney humein diya kiya h?
Arey khud-gharz, yeh bhi to soch Tuney Pakistan ko diya hi kiya h?

"Think 100 times before you take a decision, But once that decision is taken, stand by it as one man" - Muhammad Ali Jinnah

 

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yousri said Last 14th august per mein ne ...

Last 14th august per mein ne Pakistan k liye apni kuch sochon ko ilfaz diye, jo mein ne sirf Orkut friends sey share kiye. Aj mein App sub sey share kerna chahta hon.

Gas, Bijli, Mehngayi, Terrorism, Corruption, yeh sub mere mulk ko abhi waqten bimariyan hein. Mager mujhy mere Maa Baap ney bechpan mein betaya tha "ISS WATAN KI ZAMEEN, HUMARI MAA HAI. HUM ISI PER PAIDA HOVEY. JAB KOI DOSERI ZAMEEN HUMEIN APNEY UPER REHNA PESAND NA KR REHI HO, TEB EIK YEHI DHARTI MAA HOTI HAI, JO HUMEIN APNEY BECHON KI TERHA PEHLO MEIN BULA LAITI HAI". Aj mein bechpan ki zanjeer tord kr eik Jawan semjhdaar insaan ben gya hon. Aur ab mein sochta hon, aj meri dharti Maa bimaar hai, koi bahir ki taqetein isey thek nahin honey dy rehi, to kya mein aj itna bura ben jaon k apni Bimaar Maa ko isi halet mein chord kr us sy be-kheber ho kr, apni eik aleg duniya sejaon? Mere Dada Dadi, Nana Nani usi Maa ki goud mein to deffan hein.. Mein kaisey aj apni us Maa ki halet sy be-kheber rehon jis ny mujhy eik pehchan di, fakher krny ko itna kuch diya, izzet di, ghulami sy nijaat di.. Nahin, mein itna ghedaar baita nahin. Mere khoun mein h, PAKISTAN ZINDABAAD!!!

Yousri.

 

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azharm said Yousri ji ...

Aur ab mein sochta hon, aj meri dharti Maa bimaar hai, koi bahir ki taqetein isey thek nahin honey dy rehi, to kya mein aj itna bura ben jaon k apni Bimaar Maa ko isi halet mein chord kr us sy be-kheber ho kr, apni eik aleg duniya sejao

Kia baat hai Yousri
zinda bad

 

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Naseebfinder said sorry I was away from ...

sorry I was away from QL,kuch kaam khatam karne thea.
yousri, BRAVO

aise ache jazbaat deikh kar buhat kuch kehne ko dil kar raha hai, watan ke baat pe dil itna dharakta hai ke kuch likhna mushkil ho jata hai.


 

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azharm said Naseebfinder ji ...

Ap kay baghair mehfil berawnaq rehti hai
Pakistan kay liay ap kay jazbat qabile qadr hain
ap sahi kehti hain

WE R IF PAKISTAN IS

 

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blue_rose said azharm ji i saw the forum n ...

azharm ji i saw the forum n coment there bht khoob lekha hai ap nay..

n yousri ji nice thoughts pakistan zindabad

 

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azharm said blue_rose ji ...

u'll find the comments in that forum but i must thank you 4 your liking it as usual
so am honored
Pakistan zindabad

 

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azharm said Naseebfinder ji ...

ap ki rai kay liay aik link
parhiay ga please

http://www.qatarlivi...

 

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azharm said ary ...

per kyun chor diya?

 

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Naseebfinder said شکوہ عصر حاضر ...

شکوہ عصر حاضر Shikwa asr-e-hazar


 

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azharm said Naseebfinder ji ...

be had mamnoon, as usual ap kay comments hosla barhatay hain
n sure i'll try to arrange what can be termed as deewan
thank you once again

n so sad 4 your billi

 

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blue_rose said hmm azharm ji aap ko koi ...

hmm azharm ji aap ko koi mazakia poetry ati hai??
bht sanjeeda poetry ho gai..

 

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azharm said blue_rose ji ...

ap ki farmaish ho aur poori na kar sakain to faida hi kia
lijiay hazir hai
punjabi main hai parhiay aur apnay comments say navaziay ga bhi

http://www.qatarlivi...

 

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blue_rose said azharm ji thanks fermaish ...

azharm ji thanks fermaish pori kernay ka..but mujhe punjabi samaj nahi ati..sorry..

well chalain koi baat nahi..waisay hi ap nay itni zaida achay achay shair lekhay hain..ap poet hain?? kab say?ap ki books hain? ap english poetry nahi kertay?

 

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azharm said blu_rose ...

oh i am so sorry, i wasn't knowing this fact, but punjabi is my own language and i feel i can express myself much better in it, any way will write something in urdu as well insha ALLAH n let u know

well i am not a poet really as what i am writing is not termed as poetry by the people who runs poetry forums, but any way the do tolerate me sometimes. the problem with me is that i do not know urdu much.

yes i have written a few poems in english as well, peoblem is that i have not been putting them on forums like i am doing now so some of my ---- friends have published most of them with their names on them
any way one of them i am putting here for your view. i wrote it 4 my mom she died in dubai last year

 

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azharm said in the memory of my mom ...

“Maa” The Friend Indeed

Maa when ever I was in need
You were the only friend indeed

Protecting all your descendants
From problematic profuse weeds
Stringing all the scattered progeny
Into strongly bounded beads
Maa when ever I was in need
You were the only friend indeed

Abode into this barren world
Under the hell resembling sun
You were my piece of cloud
And everything seeming fun
Maa when ever I was in need
You were the only friend indeed

Unfounded was a quaver
I used to grow and glitter
Stood tall amongst the dwarfs
Never ever felt a jitter
Maa when ever I was in need
You were the only friend indeed

You used to foster the lineage
With your piece of only bread
Just who can compensate the damage?
Its now when you are dead
Maa when ever I was in need
You were the only friend indeed

Antecedently facing the intricate
Azhar stood behind you proud
What have I reverted to you maama
A small, course, white shroud
Maa when ever I was in need
You were the only friend indeed

 

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Sabhassam said very nice one Azharm bro. I ...

very nice one Azharm bro.

I have been reading all the poetry and comments, I only went away for a few days and missed a lot.

Bohot hi atcha likha hai sabne, sab ko shukria kartahoon.

Azharm bhai ko hum request karte hai ke ek book of great poetry likhe, aap zaroor soche is bare me.

Dua kartehe ke, Ya Allah sab ki mushkil door karde, hamare aur aapke mulk ki hifazat kare, sab musalmanon ko ek banade ameen. Suma ameen....

 

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azharm said Sabhassam ji ...

AP duaon main yaad rakkha kijiay aur ALLAH is ki bhi isteta-at day dey ga insha ALLAH

all our prayers 4 muslims umma n Pakistan

Pakistan kay chahnay walon kay liay aik poem likh raha hun jaisay hi complete hui paish karoon ga insha ALLAH

 

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yousri said Hum sub ko intezaar rehy ga ...

Hum sub ko intezaar rehy ga Azhar bhai.

"Think 100 times before you take a decision, But once that decision is taken, stand by it as one man" - Muhammad Ali Jinnah

 

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Naseebfinder said azhar ji so sad, ALLAH TAala ...

ALLAH TAala Ap ke Walida ko jannat ul firdows mein jagah dei. Ameeen thum Ameeen.

"Maan"

beautiful poetry.


 

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blue_rose said wow azharm ji bht achi poem ...

wow azharm ji bht achi poem hai..ap ko shouk hai poems lekhnay ka?

well waiting for ur next beautiful poem..waisay kaisay lekhtay hain ap?? just thoughts or what?


 

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azharm said Yousri ji ...

ap ka intezar khatam hua " Pakistan" parhiay aur hum ap kay comments ka intezar karain gay

 

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azharm said Naseebfinder ji ...

that is so nice of you "ameen"
ap ki khater "Pakistan" likhi hai
parhiay ga please

 

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azharm said blue_rose ...

yes i like to write poems, but the matter of fact is that I even do not know when something comes into my mind, even if i am driving i'll stop the car and write what ever struck
thats usually a master part of what i write ( the basic idea)
thanks 4 liking it
please do read "Pakistan"
waiting 4 your comments

 

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Sabhassam said Ishq ke rang me rang jaein ...

Ishq ke rang me rang jaein jab afkaar to khulte hein ghulaamon pe wo asraar ke rehte hein wo tawseef sanaae shahe abraar me har lehzaa Guhar baar

Warna Wo Sayyade Aale Nasabi han Wohi Ummi Laquabi Hashmi o Motalabi o Arabi o Farashi o Madani aur kahan hamse gunahgaar

 

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azharm said Sabhassam ji ...

bohat khoobsoorat tehreer

 

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Sabhassam said Shukria Bhaijaan ...

Aarzoo ye he ke ho qualb muattar wo mutahhar wo munawwar wo mujalla wo musaffa durehaalaa jo nazar aae kahin jalwaae roue shahe abraar

Jin ke qadmon ki chamak chaand sitaaron me nazar aae jidhar se wo guzar jaae wohi raah chamak jae damak jae mahak jae bane rawnaque gulzaar

 

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azharm said Sabhassam ji ...

bohat khoob,
UK lagta hai cancel?

 

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Sabhassam said Shukria Bro Jana he UK, ...

Shukria Bro

Jana he UK, Friday night flight Insha Allah, only for 8 days.

 

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Sabhassam said Soung loun khushbue geisoue ...

Soung loun khushbue geisoue Muhammad wo siya zulf nahin jis ke muquaabil ye banafsha ye suyunti ye chambeli ye gule laalaa o champaa ka nikhaar

Jis ki nakhat pe hein qurbaan gulo bargo saman naafaae aahoue khutan bade chaman buwe chaman naaze chaman noure chaman range chaman saaraa chaman zaar

 

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azharm said sabhassam ji bohat khoob n happy journey ...

جب مسجد بنوی کے مینا ر نظر آئے
اللہ کی رحمت کے آثار نظر آئے

منظر ہو بیاں کیسے الفاظ نہیں ملتے
جس وقت محمد کا دربار نظر آئے

بس یاد آ رہا ہے اتنا سینے سے لگی جالی
پھر یاد نہیں کیا کیا انوار نظر آئے

مکے کی فضاؤں میں طیبہ کی ہواؤں میں
ہم نے تو جدھر دیکھا سرکار نظر آئے

چھوڑ آیا ظہوری میں دل و جان مدینے میں
اب جینا یہاں مجھ کو دشوار نظر آئے

Jub masjid-e-nabvi kay meenar nazar ayay
ALLAH ki rehmat kay asaar nazar ayay

manzar ho bayaan kaisay alfaaz naheen miltay
jis waqt mohammad ka darbar nazar ayay

bus yad a raha hai itna seenay say lagi jali
phir yad nahin kia kia anwaar nazar ayay

makkay ki fazaon main taibba ki hawaon main
hum nay to jidhar dekha sarkar nazar ayay

chor aya zahoori main dilo jaan madeenay main
ab jeena yahan mujh ko dushwaar nazar ayay

 

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Sabhassam said Azharm bhai ...

makkay ki fazaon main taibba ki hawaon main
hum nay to jidhar dekha sarkar nazar ayay

Subhanallah, Bohot atche

 

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Sabhassam said Yaa Nabi ! Aap ka ye adbi ...

Yaa Nabi ! Aap ka ye adbi sanaakhwane dare rahmat ka gada detaa he dar dar ye sadaa detaa he Aap se chaahat ka salaa apni zaban me taasir

Soun ke sab ahle chaman ous ka sukhan oun ko bhi aajaae hayaa sar ho nidaamat se jhukaa aur nazar dekhe wo islaaf ki oulfat ka nazaaraa eik baar

 

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wild_lyone said azharm ...

yar what sort of punjabi is this, totally different from aasi toosi lassi peeti

 

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azharm said wild ji ...

yeh hamaray potohari areas main aur saraiki belt main boli jati hai, actually its a mixture of the two

and ap ki lassi say ALLAH mehfooz rakhay

 

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wild_lyone said azharm ...

yar sometime hamari lassi chakho to sahi badshaho tussi apni bhool jao gay. hahahahah

 

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main_ik_sarab_hun said wild pa ji ...

sanu bulao na hum nus kay awain gay hehehehehhe

 

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wild_lyone said main_ik_sarab_hun ...

most welcome

 

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azharm said ap sub doston kay liay aik news ...

http://www.hallagull...

meri poem "maa" has one the top award in "hullagulla" forum
it is all by the grace of ALLAH subhaan-a-hu wa taala

 

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main_ik_sarab_hun said azharm ...

CONGRATULATIONS very well done you deserved it (waisay meray naa rehndi tay main jit janda c ga na) hahahaha

 

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azharm said main_ik_sarab_hun ...

thank u so much sarab ji

 

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Naseebfinder said .... ...

mabrook

 

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azharm said Naseebfinder ji ...

Thank you so much

ALLAH barich feech

 

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